Thursday, April 19, 2012

Peer Review: Cayleigh, Trey, and Cecily

Cayleigh is doing a video on xtranormal
Trey is doing  a powerpoint
Cecily is doing a website.

8 comments:

  1. Trey-The history of Milltown and the people that have lived there for a very long time. The audio clips would have been good, but I think you will do just fine without them.

    Cayleigh- The history of women’s rights in America involving Marriage, the xtranormal was good, and gave me an idea ho women were repressed.

    Cecily- The grey on black makes it hard to see. I like he black, but its just not very clear to read.

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  2. Cayleigh- PowerPoint with Video was good, the video was a good length
    Trey-Interesting to hear about the stories from a small town
    Cecily- Dark print on the black was a little hard to read

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  3. Trey discussed his hometown of Milltown. He fears that not many people are interested, however there is an audience who is intrigued by his topic.
    Cayleigh's project over marriage rights in regards to women was informative on previous history, but not necessarily present-day customs.
    Cecily had a good start to her website that seems to beneficial in educating the class on Jazz history and all the different types within the genera.

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  4. Trey: I liked how you had a broad topic, so that it is relatable to other people who live in small cities.

    Cayleigh: Liked the topic because it is an unknown issue to some of us. The video was good but needs a better introduction.

    Cecily: Like how you had a list of music suggestions, and how you talked about the Jazz Movement.

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  5. Trey - Good topic! I think it will be an interesting presentation!
    Cayleigh - Good video. Interesting topic! Maybe a little more explanation.
    Cecily - Good topic! I like the website, but there is a bit of an issue with the font color. It doesn't show up very well on the black background. Maybe a lighter gray or white, for a harsh feel, But maybe a purple color, in the jazz theme? A black suit and a purple tie is the most universal outfit for a performing jazz musician, so this could be an interesting touch.

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  6. Javonte, Edilia

    Cayleigh is presenting on the prejudice married women have faced historically in America. She is also doing a xtranormal video.

    The passion Trey has for his hometown, enthuses his audience. Very impressed with the research he has conducted.

    Cecily has a very solid outline for her website.

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